Monday, July 20, 2015

To determination.

 To a brother, who made it possible.
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He walked along the thorns in life,
Bleeding from every nerve, his hopes were high,
Into the darkness, in search of light,
He barged in, with every breath he could find.


He stumbled upon the failures,
And came across the knights of it,
Some, who gave up without a fight,
And some, who gave in, just to survive.

A thousand thoughts stormed his mind,
As a hundred dreams rose from the dead,
Dreams, that couldn't turn into reality,
Still breathing right under his skin, where the heart is.

The darkness called out to him,
Asking him to run, before it destroyed him, like many others, who tried,
He paid a deaf ear, to the cries of it,
And as he walked further, the path was lit.

Were his senses playing with him, or he really had achieved it,
The light everybody wanted, but no one could reach it,
He stood awestruck, at what he had discovered,
A life, beyond the dark, where the sun still shines.

- Azad Hussain @ smokeofsulphur.blogspot.in

7 comments:

  1. cz the difference between the possible and the impossible lies in a person's determination

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  2. It sure does , Mr. Anonymous. Determination is what keeps one moving towards the success.

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  3. very well said Mr. Azad. As Napoleon Bonaparte said "The truest wisdom is a resolute determination".

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  4. True that, Mr. Anonymous. Well, keep visiting here, i hope to inspire more, and spread the word.

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  5. sorry late to read it well a very constructive thought.

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  6. determination plus dedication towards success. :)

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